A MISERLY IMPULSE

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lau na haftyam pachhiko aayo hola bhaneko ta batti satti nibhaera-- dhumrapan manahi chha --viko bajradanti -- yasto yasto po aako re chha --

Malai ta na Sunil ko pir laagya chha -- na ti aru bhate somharuko-- malai ta pallu ra kanchhiko po maya laagdai chha ta -- ke bhako bhako -- tara kasaile pir garnu pardaina -- sum_off le tala mathi gare ma chhu ni--

 

 

sum_off-my apparent laziness for editing is not new. however,i will pay more attention to it from next time sir.my english grammar is terrible n punctuations, ohh, don't ask.Why don't the grammar books talk like us?
waiting for the next part...

john_galt- must say sajha's literary world is not the same without you. miss you more,everyday you're gone.

sum_off daju,
khai ta jitaurai ? haha ...
>> It's been a while in Sajha, looks like only few still remember me. << haha, no way dude ! no way !!!

Sum off,
So many stories later, I am still amazed at your ability to concoct stories. Where rest of us just see loved ones, relatives, acquaintances, strangers and their daily routine,  you see a life lived and weave stories out of them. I have said this before and I will say this to you again, because of you, our stories will be told. Kudos to you.

But still, I want to make an observation....is it necessary that you resort to cliches like "Maybe the uncle does not need to know, but the doctor needs to know.” I heard a similar dialogue the other day in grey's anatomy.

“I thought you guys were over with, whatever you guys were fighting for.'' Is that fighting for or fighting about? I just wanted to ask because if it is fighting for, i take that as at some point they were fighting for a common cause, which will give a whole new dimension to the story.

miserly impulse? i reckon the dispute was over some unexpectedly trivial stuff?

doesn't seem like it though when you portray seriousness in raman's eyes

good going sum-off dai...eagerly waiting for the next part

and hope you won't delete the story with your own 'miserly impulse' hahahaha..

Undelete it sum off.

I wonder how come a miserly whim swirl you ?

The article was incomplete and ppl complained/ commented about it.

 

How come a diamond drop of my hand and I don't notice it ?

 

Rythm,

 

“Nice going.” That’s it? You have not read it, have you? Grrrrrrrrrr. Why are you not writing?

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Oh come on Sum off!! I did read it. I am sooo completely busy nowadays that I hardly come to sajha but I DID read your story and because I was at work and my boss was makin me do something I could only write a short note but I really did like it. PLEASE post the first and second half. I am sure your maami knows what the internet is now and will love if you posted your stories here.

P.S: About me not writing, I seriously dont even have time to think of writing  let alone taking out time to write. I am not free a single day.. morning, afternoon or evening! But I would certainly read if you posted the second half!

jhan daju bhaneko ta, delete po handyo ba  .... la la bhaigo chahidaina malai jitauri ..... katha bhaye hunchha
hya bro, jhyaau nagara na !!

now thats a miserly impulse,
and out of curiosity, who is Shyam?? or is it Shyam_Off
btw sum_off  out of  [VIEWED 1228 TIMES]...............................[ummm say somewhere between 28-30 hits should have been mine..........its an approximation may be more may be less] and you say people don't notice

anyways please post the other half along with the deleted one once you are through with momentary impulse....okay!!!!
jai nepal jai shyam

occult

lekhda lekhdai edit bhayisakechha...............now explain IPv6

Sum off dai, thts not fair..Continuation को wait गर्दा गर्दै story नै delete गर्देको???? As you have seen the number of hits for your thread >1000, you sud continue it. If i was you I would write as long as I had one single critic of my writing. As long as I can point out my own shortcomings or even goodies;) I would continue to write to make myslef happy:) I would write to express "myslef" and in the mean time hope other people, "if interested", would enjoy it too.:)

Sum_off, it's not fair that you deleted the story while we were eagerly waiting for the second part. I don't know, if you're seeking the attention from some special person, and that person hasn't shown yet, or else your stories always get the larger number of hits in the least period of time. I'm proud to say that I've read all of your stories and I agree that you deserve special attention and all the applauds for sharing your stories with us. We always enjoyed your stories. I've written earlier also, your stories deserve to be printed. Whenever we need to read something from nepali context, there's nothing except going for the indian literature. You'd be a great asset as you can narrate the stories from nepali perspective.

PLEASE POST THE SECOND PART AND UNDELETE THE FIRST PART.

Just a couple of suggestions:

You gotta create your website with all your stories or at least a blog.

Kathmandu Post dedicates an entire page for stories; you can reach to a larger mass through that.

Most of communities and schools here have their literary magazines; I'm sure, they'll be glad to print nepali stories.

Mr. Shyam aka the crybaby, we ALL noticed. Now be a happybaby (you will remain a baby no matter what) and do post the rest of the story, please!

Pls post to this thread.

Sum_off, everyone's noticed that your article is here no more...Pls post it back and while at it, I hope to read the second part to it too.  Thanks in advance. 

-Eagerly Awaiting

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No worries, mates.  He'll post it when he is ready.  I'd rather wait and read the masterpiece than hurry and get a pedestrian drool.

why did sum_off deleted his story ?....what was the conflict??...wats goin on here??...khoi k k ho k k ? who's the crybaby ?? why is he crying ?? who took his chocolate ???? someone get him a freakin chocolate :P...can someone tell me... and why are we still makin this such a huge issue...if he wants to delete his story, he's the owner of this story...he has every right to do so. If he wants to write and read himself for himself by himself why do we care ???

Hey sum_off, please undelete your story; you have right to delete your story, but don't u think, we also have right to read your stories?

Your stories are awesome; I'll never forget your stories on 'days in nepal, durgeshwori sharma and car-deal chats'; you should write more about your opinion on hindi movies.

Please post your second part soon.

Hey Sum_off,
My dashain tihar was good. Better than I expected. How was yours?
Btw, why did you delete your story again? Maile ta bujhdai bujhina. Tell me who's the culpit, I'll fix them..abui, afailai darr lagyo.. Can you please repost it? I want to read it again